After looking over my draft, it's fairly apparent that it was rushed and not as good as it can or should be. Just from a glance I can tell now that a lot of it needs to be altered or entirely changed, the cover page looks plain and somewhat messy, the table of contents isn't very visually appealing, the first magazine page hardly looks like it belongs in a magazine and the second page isn't much better than the first. For the title page I'm probably going to keep the same format but there is a lot that needs to be changed. The picture and text parts at the bottom look completely separated and its easy to tell that this was my first time ever making a cover page. The table of contents looks plain and boring, along with the different sizes of the pictures making it look unsymmetrical and weird. The first article page can hardly be called a magazine page as it looks more akin to a page on a pamphlet, the text box is weirdly positioned and the text inside of it is far to big for a magazine page, along with there being a very small amount of information actually being in the text box. The same problems are apparent in the second page and I can tell that I will need to almost entirely remake them.
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